When I first wrote my poems I didn't really think about tangibility and poetic devices and style. I just wrote what I felt, or what the topic was and I went on from there. I didn't think of how I could make it better because I thought since I wrote it that way then that's the way I wanted it to be.
Through my revision process I took out all the cliche's and I edited it and added punctuation marks. Some other comments that I got was to make my ode more abstract. One of my lines didn't really make sense with its next line so I made changes to that and made it more
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